I was really shock when Ms. Sackstein gave us another project. After I start working on my blog project, I start to think it's not that hard to complete. I was thinking about doing slavery but I think I should do something new. So, after thinking about it for 3 hours I finally decide to do women suffrage.
Ms.Sackstein gave us many project to improve our learning skill. I learned many thing about women suffrage after all that researching and thinking. My grammar improve as I start posting and revising. I learn more about the women that's going through at that time period.
The project start to get challenging and fun at the same time. There are many genres that I have a hard time to work on. I got trouble understanding how to do the advertisement, monologue, and experiment. So, I will go to my classmate's blogs and see if they did one of those. I still don't quite get it. One of the genre that I think is hard is 1 act play, OK, maybe it's not that hard but I amitt that I was too lazy to do it.
I face many challenges such as finding good information and source. I also try to find the timeline of that person that was writing a letter to her parent. The reason that I was finding the timeline of the person that was involve with women suffrage was because I want to sent the data straight when she's writing the letter. One thing that came easily in this project, is finding the trustworthy site and got the right information, and create the post.
I try to avoid the some information that have nothing to do with my topic of women suffrage. As I start researching I learned many new things about women suffrage, ex: the time of each women going through while fighting for their right. It took about 70 years to finally gain their right. If it took that long, I might give up already.
I have trouble paying attention to my spelling and grammar. I got trouble looking for my mistake after I publish it. So I'll ask my classmate to check what did i did wrong, and something I ask them to go to my blog and comment. There are many errors that I still need to correct, but ms. sackstein help me alot by commenting on my blog and give me some good advice!
I felt really proud after I finish my blog, after all my hard work. I know that I still can inprove more, cause writing is all about rvising and make it better. I'm really thankful to ms.sackstein cause she really tries to improve our weak point to a strong one!
Wednesday, June 4, 2008
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Ning,
You clearly know yourself as a learner and have come a long way. I have watched you work hard on this project and I think you have a lot to be proud of. Working on revision and proofreading is hard and should be a skill that you continue to work on in the future.
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