Thursday, May 15, 2008

Peom

My will
was never filled

have no rights

But I’ll fight



have no freedom
but I'll make my own kingdom

doesn't make sense
when men said we're tense

I'm not scare
cause this have to be fair

we are strong
like a big king Kong

we are brave
and got what we have

We can't stay in this cave

Because we won't be treat like a slave!

Reflection: I can't think of anything when I decide to do a poem. So I try to pretend that I am one of the woman that help fight for women suffrage. I image myself back in time, fighting for right and the courage we have. As soon as I start thinking I thought of many thing. The felling of brave, tears, and courage. I type it to the blog, and told my friend to read it for me. It came out pretty good.

1 comment:

Ms. Sackstein said...

good poem, but make sure to write a reflection explaining what you were doing and what poetic devices you've employed.